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long night

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November 9, 2011
long night by ~RestlessSands
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come, come what may; the night
is lean and our fingers are fat, candle
clay stubs wrapped round
wine bottle necks,
swapping lipstick with that cold wine
cold sweat -
        tang of metal clanging round our
        round mouths,
cistern of words that turn to lime
as soon as they are bleached out

        come, come what will,
we say,
        tumble up the yard
        and into the morning
a barbeque growls into life


in the shadows, little ghouls
        with the plum-meat of their eyes drawn down
        and voices like wet cement being scritched,
        scratch their feet
:shrug:

for: :iconlove-original-lit:
and their prompt, only a dream...
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katarthis's avatar
Sometimes I see a Daily Deviation and figure it wasn't meant to move me - I oft wonder what it takes to be seen and appreciated in that fashion. And then there are the ones that right from the start I read them and say "this ought to be a DD." Oddly enough, it was rather refreshing to come and read this and see that it was in fact one.

Wonderful images and wonderful words. That whole first stanza spoke so loud and clear.

k